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    dots Submission Name: Vinegar and Winedots
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    Author: His goth child
    ASL Info:    15/male/Loserville
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 82/79/45
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 193
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1094



    Description:
       um...if you need help ask....its sorta complicated....


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    dotsVinegar and Winedots
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    Wine to quench your thirst
    Foresee the present
    Vinegar to dull your pain
    Reveal the future to us

    Flesh for our bread
    Blood for our wine
    Is this what you provide?
    Oh-oh-oh-oh

    Spread out your arms
    And close your eyes
    Dream of what lies in the afterlife
    Spread out your arms
    And close your eyes
    Don’t forget about me
    I pray you safe return

    Scars down your back
    Steel in your wrists
    Thorns on your crown
    Oh-oh-oh-oh
    Scars down your back
    Steel in your wrists
    Thorns on your crown
    Oh-oh-oh-oh

    Wine for the thirst
    Vinegar for your pain
    Reveal this to us
    Who hit you?

    Spread out your arms
    And close your eyes
    Dream of what lies in the afterlife
    Spread out your arms
    And close your eyes
    Don’t forget about me
    I pray you safe return

    Don’t forget me
    Oh-oh-oh-oh
    Vinegar and wine
    Oh-oh-oh-oh




    Submitted on 2006-11-15 20:26:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hmm.. sounds like lyrics. One of The chorus(?) is all twisted up up from how you usally hear those lines. That was interesting. for a song i suppose it would pass but ... im not sure if i grasped whatever your convaying because most of it is reapeating.
    | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]



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