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Love Is Love is not a word Love is not absurd Love isn’t made for 2, 3 weeks For you it never speaks Love is not a toy Love is not false joy Love speaks the truth in all directions Love bonds those with inseparable connections Love is not a person Love is not to worsen A union that unfolds its true emotion It’s all about devotion Love is not a crush Love does not rush Your true feelings inside But you never confide Love is not to play Yet you fuck around with it everyday Love is not meant for your well being Come and go is what you’re seeing Love is a powerful sense Love is not about offence Love is a compelling dream that puts me to sleep Love is something really deep Love is what I’ve always sought I always had this beautiful thought Of me and a man who’d defend me like gold He’d be my protector to hold Love is a virtue of care But true love is extremely rare I though for sure I found it this time But I still have depressing ladders to climb So here I am, searching again Crawling on the Heartbroken Train And take the ride, I’ve took before I don’t feel happy anymore |
oh jeez. i think you spoke on part of all the girls. good job ![]() | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ] | OOOO Lee Lee | ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by panzyrocker | [ Reply to This ] | Well beside the forced rhyme ya i agree love but you missed a sentence | love is not fair..... I also like a person to an extreme but i say thats like cause she never liked me either, If that guy left you that means he lost you not you lose him. Have a headweight in life .... Rule this world its yours.... ....King Keestu ( Ya i like some one and she doesnt like me) my first five poems are dedicated to her and yet she ignores me. This is the first time i see a boyfriend dumpunig its usually the girls that like to do that even though i have never experienced dumping... The ending is what all must like in the above poem. Next time dont find just any guy...find a dream and dont lose hope on it.... even though dreams never come true love is a dream worth waiting for | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by keestu | [ Reply to This ] | Ah, the everlasting big question of the universe and a thousand awnsers to go along with it. But I especially liked this one as it is a personal point of view. I like the repetition in this case and the flow is superb as is the rhyme. Sad to see this piece ends sadly but so do a lot of loves. Cheer up :) , you're very good. | | Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ] | |