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Love Is


Author: coldxaura.
ASL Info:    15/F/CANAAADA
Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 23 /15 /8
Words: 228
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Ugh...This is Love. Love is hard to find, and is rare. I've just learned that today, as my boyfriend currently broke up with me...I feel like the world is on my shoulders, and I cant help but drop it soon. To those who have found true love, I love you all, and I hope you have found your soul mate; I hope you found a person who you have developed true love for. That's what it's all about.


Love Is



Love Is

Love is not a word
Love is not absurd
Love isn’t made for 2, 3 weeks
For you it never speaks

Love is not a toy
Love is not false joy
Love speaks the truth in all directions
Love bonds those with inseparable connections

Love is not a person
Love is not to worsen
A union that unfolds its true emotion
It’s all about devotion

Love is not a crush
Love does not rush
Your true feelings inside
But you never confide

Love is not to play
Yet you fuck around with it everyday
Love is not meant for your well being
Come and go is what you’re seeing


Love is a powerful sense
Love is not about offence
Love is a compelling dream that puts me to sleep
Love is something really deep

Love is what I’ve always sought
I always had this beautiful thought
Of me and a man who’d defend me like gold
He’d be my protector to hold

Love is a virtue of care
But true love is extremely rare
I though for sure I found it this time
But I still have depressing ladders to climb

So here I am, searching again
Crawling on the Heartbroken Train
And take the ride, I’ve took before
I don’t feel happy anymore




Submitted on 2006-11-15 22:01:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  oh jeez. i think you spoke on part of all the girls. good job
| Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]
  OOOO Lee Lee i [censored] love it tis really good and alot of rhyming lmfao u have a couple of speeling mistakes though and yeah i completly understand what you mean and Porcelaine was right you are really good and you need to cheer up and keestu is right as well love IS A DREAM WORTH WAITING FOR so odnttake it for granted and youll know when you've met the right person
| Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by panzyrocker | [ Reply to This ]
  Well beside the forced rhyme ya i agree love but you missed a sentence

love is not fair.....

I also like a person to an extreme but i say thats like cause she never liked me either, If that guy left you that means he lost you not you lose him.

Have a headweight in life .... Rule this world its yours....

....King Keestu ( Ya i like some one and she doesnt like me) my first five poems are dedicated to her and yet she ignores me.

This is the first time i see a boyfriend dumpunig its usually the girls that like to do that even though i have never experienced dumping...

The ending is what all must like in the above poem.

Next time dont find just any guy...find a dream and dont lose hope on it.... even though dreams never come true love is a dream worth waiting for
| Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by keestu | [ Reply to This ]
  Ah, the everlasting big question of the universe and a thousand awnsers to go along with it. But I especially liked this one as it is a personal point of view. I like the repetition in this case and the flow is superb as is the rhyme. Sad to see this piece ends sadly but so do a lot of loves. Cheer up :) , you're very good.
| Posted on 2006-11-16 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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