Hey kid! Long time I've been away. So, HI!!!
;) To your write. A million thoughts are hidding under so few words. It was well liked by me. It took me back to lonely momnets overlooking the city and pondering "what if's" and "if onlys."
I'd personlly like to see the years change your work from just experiance alone! Or perhaps I just need to read more of your works.
Steve-o -- Missed ya!
Short and sweet, this poem is full of emotion. The line "the moon becomes a spotlight, for that long goodbye" really make me feel the meaning of this piece as i am one who has said painful goodbyes to loved ones. I love your work. x