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people can just bite me

Author: SkinnyWhiteBoy
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people can just bite me

when theres war who needs life. when theres life who nedds war. when theres war who is dying. when there isent who is living . you deside wich is better. i ask you

Submitted on 2006-11-16 09:23:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  actually i didnot understand the point
hope i do oneday

see ya
| Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by boringlife | [ Reply to This ]
  this got potential, liked the idea of this,, just got one suggestion to make, if ya put the lines into stanzas it would be alot easy'er for the reader to read,, it still a nice poem though,, I kinda liked it,,

well written, keep it up..

We be in touch, cheers..
| Posted on 2006-11-17 00:00:00 | by -=Bass=- | [ Reply to This ]

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