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    dots Submission Name: Manifest Faithdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsManifest Faithdots
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    Sunshine breaks through the vermilion rain,
    The rain that corrupted the minds of the sane.
    Rain that brought human race to disgrace,
    Now the sun drying it from my face.
    From behind a forlorn cloud cove,
    Emerges the perfect glimmer rainbow.
    Bringing color back from the tainted red,
    Color that was once forbidden and dead.
    Beliefs separated brought civilization down;
    All people equal no longer segregation, tied and bound.
    World surrounded by only egalitarianism in faith,
    Earth finally liberated and safe.




    Submitted on 2004-01-28 22:48:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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