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    dots Submission Name: Love or Not?dots

    Author: Tgossip
    ASL Info:    22
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 317
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove or Not?dots

    Why do people choose not to indulge themselves in the most heavenly gift of all?
    Are the kisses and hugs and smiles not enough to lift oneís spirit and bounce from the wall?
    Is Love where candles are burned all night until both shivering bodies lights are out?
    Or is it the warm hands on a cold morning that wraps the body or is that too much energy to be putting out?

    When is too much really too much?

    Is it when breakfast is made without being asked or water is run without being told?
    Or is it when dinner is paid for and one is escorted and secured to the tenth degree so she doesnít have to be bold.

    Is this Love?

    Or is it when I love you is told to you through different messages that make the human body glow like never before.
    Or is it gentle rubs and strong fingers that caress the body up and down to soothe the dayís sores.

    Why Not Love?

    Is it that it isnít Love but what comes with the price?
    Headaches, migraines, and phone slamming until one breakdown and cries.
    It can be stopped but not until both views are seen and told.
    But then the same thing will cause the conversation to unfold.
    Like beasts running in the wild, adrenaline is pumping and body sweating getting ready for a war.
    Minds racing and tempers flying while echoes go down the hall from a slammed door.
    Now, Bodies exhausted and minds thought out while soft music and chilly winds stare us in our faces

    Trying to let go the problem and understand the other personís view while each other minds are in different places.
    Then you both make up just to start things over,
    Because that is just the way how Love is!

    Submitted on 2006-11-16 16:57:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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