Description: I have a poetry portfolio due for my Creative Writing I class tomorrow before we head down to the local book store and cafe to read our poetry.
Can't tell the difference between
dreams and reality
Can't tell the distance between
forever and mortality
Falling forever
into voids incomplete
Seen that before--
moments in repeat
Swimming for the light
never meeting air
Running-- being chased--
sweating beads of despair
Clawing at silks
and tearing out screams
Figuring out
that this is no dream
What is reality but
"handle with care?"
What is a dream but
something not there?
Combining the two
is a deadly mistake
A mixture of them
and a nightmare you'll make
A rambling,rhyming,rollercoaster ride of a poem.A popular theme-see <Helpless> but you deal with it well.The reader is kept interested and guessing throughout.I like the idea of a living nightmare and the confusion between reality and fantasy.Nice one. Cheers A.C
I really like this write You did a fantastic job with this You showed your readers that life is not all Positive Everyone will deal with some negativity in their lives but its how you choose to deal with it that makes the difference I believe there is a Positive to every negative Once you find that Positive it will lead you to happiness Again Great Job I wish you the Best of Luck at your reading God Bless Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron
Submission Name: Nightmares
