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    dots Submission Name: ember if autumn, seek refuge in ashdots
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    Author: etheariac
    ASL Info:    17/f/NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 75/91/36
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 74
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1068



    Description:
       This is kind of inspired by Autumn's fading and its connection to the death that Winter brings.


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    dotsember if autumn, seek refuge in ashdots
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    fall's encantations,
    its words draw
    death like
    knives
    pull blood
    and I trim
    ends of Autumn
    with charismatic
    grin
    and prayers
    informed in
    pestilence;
    manifestation
    clings
    to the back
    of mental maps
    like
    breathless leaf
    saturated and
    desperately parasitic,
    glued obstinate to
    skeleton
    of metal motor cadaver
    that treads asphalt
    in mechanic and
    eternal youth,
    fuming intently into
    the lung of
    afternoon,
    it found
    a half dead man
    burying God atop the ground,
    piling leaves
    on grass
    with pernicious ambition
    and scars the stuff
    of stories,
    evident in 10 point
    October
    skin eroded
    and canyoned
    fonts
    that age and honor
    shaped
    and shaved,
    replaced with quarantined
    wisdom
    and hot ember
    a smolder,
    no intent to flame.




    Submitted on 2006-11-16 20:21:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well, I agree...that is part of Autumn.

    No flames for the things that have died.

    I liked that...and the patteren you presented it in was refreshing to say the least.
    | Posted on 2006-11-17 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]



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