Description: Twicked it a bit from my original poem.
The Way I Am -------------------------------------------
The way I am
is thanks to you.
My vision blurred
from the truth.
Lies and deception
are second nature.
How did I come
to where I am now?
It's not like you care, right?
You gave it up without a fight.
So I'll continue now,
walking away, that I vow.
I'll create a path,
using your words.
This is pretty darn good! I like it, i really like that i can most certainly relate to it as im sure man people can. The flow was very nice and your word usage was good. I really liked the beginning:"The way I am
is thanks to you.
My vision blurred
from the truth.
Lies and deception
are second nature"
Those lines really stood out to me the most. very nice write!
Nice.the simplicity in the style helps clearify the words.i like (i dont see much of that) aws for the story line in the poem i like the feeling, we've been there before on this side of the screen (i say we couse im crazy lol)bravo keep it up
Submission Name: The Way I Am
