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    dots Submission Name: Play thingdots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 1139
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 610



    Description:
       WELL THIS IS WAYYY WAYY WAYY DIFFERENT THAN ANY POEM I HAVE WROTE... ITS IN A DIFFERENT DIRECTION BUT W/E... MY POINT CAME ACROSS.. HOPE YOU ENJOY!


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    dotsPlay thingdots
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    im not your little play toy
    im not your little whore
    dont tell me that you love me
    if you mess around with other girls

    dont tell me that you want me
    cause that only means one thing
    you want me in your bed
    right inbetween my legs

    dont tell me that you need me
    you only need me for a thing
    well sweetie i aint gettin on me knees
    so have a horse blow your thang

    im not your little play toy
    im not your little whore
    so dont tell me that you love me
    if you mess around with other girls




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    ||| Comments |||
      damn might make a guy be scared to talk to you
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by Poetic Ways | [ Reply to This ]
      There you go, that is how you tell a guy to go [censored] himself. This is a great write and I am glad that you have come into a better mood.

    Lil_ Buddy
    | Posted on 2006-11-17 00:00:00 | by Lil_ Buddy | [ Reply to This ]
      There you go girl thats the way to write I love you, good stuff you got it going on, rock on
    | Posted on 2006-11-17 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      HeLL YES!!!! that's freaking awesome. do you mind if we put that on a billboard? jk cuz i wish i could right outside my ex's house. lol. anyways. i'm adding that to my favorites

    rock on my sista!

    ~!rocker5871!~
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ]


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