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    dots Submission Name: The pain of being medots

    Author: thefountain
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe pain of being medots

    what is it world that you want from me
    for the blood i spill is not enough?
    why is it that my mind cant see
    the proverbial diamond in the rough

    i cant see what was once important to me
    i try to be great, as anyone should
    i try to be someone, a person thats not me
    ive tried and ive failed, and that is not good

    time runs out on me, that much i know
    i feel the forces sap away my strength
    i try every time to retain it, to grow
    but i cant do it, i cant go that length

    what is wrong, i cannot discern
    i sit here and type away, not knowing what to do
    i try to hard to learn
    until i fell out of that step, that mindset, that groove

    life has been bitter, the tears taste salty
    my mind has denatured, i feel it coming
    my functions are gone, and everythings faulty
    i cannot stop the end, from going and going

    time, once a friend, has turned me aside
    leaving me there to turn, leaving me for rosy dawn
    i lay there torn asunder, not feeling my side
    sitting there and waiting, trying to move on

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