to the beat of my heart,
moving to and fro,
vibrating non stop,
writhing in exquisite pain,
breathing you in deeply,
at the whisper of my name.
| haha i like this a lot!!! its amazing!!!|
ya i agree wit whirl its goin in my favs!! great job!
|| Posted on 2007-01-04 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ] || I REALLY LIKE YOUR PIECE. THE TITLE POURS OUT OF EVERY WORD, AND THE CLIMAX IS CLEARLY SCREAMING TO BE RELEASED IN A TORRENT OF EMOTION. I LOVE IT...|
-TO BE DAMNED IS TO BE SET FREE-
|| Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by DEATHISMYMUSE | [ Reply to This ] || oh, this is great...i was just waiting for the scream.."YES!!"|
this sounds like an orgasm to me...
ps think i'll add this to my favs
|| Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ] || aw man I wish I wrote this poem. It feels like something I would of written. If I read it a fourth time I'll start thinking I did. |
Nice work. I like the feel of this piece.
The Poor Man's Poet.
|| Posted on 2006-11-18 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ] |