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    dots Submission Name: Reddots
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    Author: ContortedDreams
    ASL Info:    16/3/LA
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 2/6/4
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 638
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    Description:
       a poem that was the result of a spur of the moment type deal...perhaps this poem will get published


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    dotsReddots
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    Seeing images play through my mind
    Wishing the past would leave me behind
    Witnessing the future get me in a bind
    The present is presently robbing me blind
    Wishing those images weren't in my head
    One shot one gun *bang* straight to the head
    Why'd you leave me now your dead
    I'm still crying and seeing red




    Submitted on 2006-11-18 00:29:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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