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    dots Submission Name: its my life its my waydots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    It's my life
    It's now or never
    I ain't gonna live forever
    I just want to live while I'm alive
    (It's my life)
    My heart is like an open highway
    Like hunter said
    I did it my way
    I just wanna live while I'm alive
    It's my life

    This is for the ones who stood their ground
    For ross and joney who never backed down
    Tomorrow's getting harder
    make no mistake
    Luck ain't even lucky
    Got to make your own breaks

    It's my life
    It's now or never
    I ain't gonna live forever
    I just want to live while I'm alive
    (It's my life)
    My heart is like an open highway
    Like hunter said
    I did it my way
    I just wanna live while I'm alive
    It's my life






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