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    dots Submission Name: when i met youdots
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    Author: gloomyanddoomy
    ASL Info:    17,female
    Elite Ratio:    1.05 - 81/426/527
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotswhen i met youdots
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    I was working as a waitress in a cocktail bar
    But even then I knew Id
    find a much better place
    either with or with out you
    The five years we have had
    have been such good times
    i still love you
    But now I think its time
    I lived my life on my own
    i guess its what i must do

    now that was lie i guess
    i should live life on my own
    but i wont
    because i still love you




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