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    dots Submission Name: Hold Me Downdots
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    Author: Chelsea_Is_Neat
    ASL Info:    15, Female, My House
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 30/23/13
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 512
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1148



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    dotsHold Me Downdots
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    Hold Me Down
    Do u think
    That ur better than me
    Dont be so full of urself
    Cuz ur wrong
    Do u even understand what it is to be strong

    U cant hold me down
    I cannot be stopped
    From living
    From being me
    U dont tell me who i am
    Cuz i kno

    Do u think
    That u can see
    Everything thats wrong with me
    Ur wrong
    Ive known me all along

    U cant hold me down
    I cannot be stopped
    From living
    From being me
    U dont tell me who i am
    Cuz i kno

    Do u think
    'That u are still right
    Are u sooo sure
    I think not
    Because u dont seem to kno
    That

    U cant hold me down
    I cannot be stopped
    From living
    From being me
    U dont tell me who i am
    Cuz i kno

    I kno me
    I kno that
    U dont tell me
    Who i ammmmm
    And

    U cant hold me down
    I cannot be stopped
    From living
    From being me
    U dont tell me who i am
    Cuz i knoooooo




    Submitted on 2006-11-18 14:04:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i htink that we are all wating to burst out of what is holdingn us down, but only some of us have the strengh good 4u
    | Posted on 2006-11-26 00:00:00 | by Gwenith Louise | [ Reply to This ]


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