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    dots Submission Name: If only I could....dots
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    Author: navarro1991
    ASL Info:    16/f/seguin
    Elite Ratio:    1.4 - 0/2/16
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIf only I could....dots
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    If only i could forget you,
    than maybe the scars of yesterday would go away.
    if only i didn't remember your face
    than maybe your image would disappear.
    if only i knew the real you
    than maybe i could have pervented what had happen.
    if only i knew.
    eveything would have been differant
    everything would have changed
    the love for you would have not been there
    and the sorrows of yesterday would not be here.
    with out any warning you were gone.
    with out a note of forgiveness did you leave me.
    with out me knowing that you weren't coming back.
    if only i knew it was just a game to you.
    if only i knew you weren't true.
    if only i had known
    than maybe this love for you wouldn't have grown.
    now that you are gone from my life and i'm maddly in love with you.
    your not here to tell me the things you use to befor i knew the real you.





    Submitted on 2006-11-18 14:10:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i cant say anything about him/her because i did something similar, although not as mean. i broke up with this guy because he was very clingy, very overbearing. and he made me someone i never wanted to be. maybe he/she had a reason to leave you. maybe he/she is just a total jerk-off. i dont know. i noticed a few typos (prevented* not pervented). but thats my only complaint.

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]

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