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    dots Submission Name: Give me drugs to kill my paindots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 344
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    Description:
       A poem about drugs and how they can help you emotionally if you want it...


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    dotsGive me drugs to kill my paindots
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    Numb me please
    I don't want to feel
    A single thing
    Shoot me with novacaine
    TO numb the emotions
    To kill my pain
    Give me pills
    So I can smile
    Give me something that kills
    Slice my skin
    Let the emotion leak away
    I don't want to know this sin
    Just numb me
    Do it quick!
    So no one sees
    What I am really about
    Full of foolish emotions
    And childish doubts
    Give me liquor
    To dull the senses
    Anything to kill me quicker
    I can stand it no longer
    Silence the screams
    Give me anything
    So I may die in my dreams...




    Submitted on 2006-11-18 18:24:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      many people try to numb their emotions with drugs, at some level it does help but the damages are numerous. you had great rhyming rhythm in this write of urs.

    i don't why but i keep feeling this poem of urs is directed towards me. on second thought i know why....
    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
      many people try to numb their emotions with drugs, at some level it does help but the damages are numerous. you had great rhyming rhythm in this write of urs.

    i don't why but i keep feeling this poem of urs is directed towards me. on second thought i know why....
    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
      Although I can relate, I can also tell that you are young and perhaps haven't truly felt the icy fingers of addictions slowly choke away your life. At once it was fun and stress-relieving for me, too. Just be careful you don't depend on drugs for your writing because you could end up in a huge rut in more ways than one. Keep writing and take care of yourself, OK? You don't have to kill yourself to find inspiration.
    | Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]
      wow...i've been there before...but i really did take drugs to kill the pain...i just wanted to be numb to everything...and i hope if your doing the same thing that everything works out!..its not a nice place to be in...but...you captured the feelings of being in that really dark place. it was tres good!...awesome!

    xoxo

    ps. hope everything really works out...good luck..drugs don't make the problems go away...they make them fade but there still there just keep that in mind
    | Posted on 2006-11-18 00:00:00 | by morbid_misery | [ Reply to This ]


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