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    dots Submission Name: My Fucked Up Happy Familydots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/155/74
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       A poem about dysfunction in the family


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    dotsMy Fucked Up Happy Familydots
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    Yelling, screaming
    harsh things said
    objects thrown
    I lay in my bed
    Trying to forget
    how dysfunctional
    this family gets
    Insecurities come out
    with every action
    You just curse and shout
    You love eachother
    Why must you fight?
    And critisize one another
    Please get along
    for the sake of me
    what ever happened
    To our happy family?




    Submitted on 2006-11-18 18:38:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      living in a dysfunctional family is one of the things i don't have an idea about but what i know is people of the family have to go through lot of emotions that they don't usually wanna feel!

    nice write!
    i hope to read U again!
    | Posted on 2006-12-07 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]
      how sad. it's the kids that suffer in the long run...they grow up insecure and afraid. nice emotion displayed here.
    worded well and very raw.
    michelle
    | Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel your pain, i used to be here. having my family creating unnecessary drama but strangely since my mom and dad stopped being a couple they have never been closer.

    Strange,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]


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