Description: No matter what everyone else says.....I'll still believe him.....and love him
Those Three Words -------------------------------------------
I picture your face
In the back of my head
Fabricated from words
That you've already said
Those three words that hang
In each falling tear
Just three simple words
I was dying to hear
I felt for your hand
But you pulled it away
So I'll wait for the end
Let it come as it may
How much would it hurt
To have said it more often?
Now they'll echo here over
In my dark, lonely coffin
But as I lay here
This is all I can do
Is say those three words
I hope they reach you
I hope you hear them
Let them into your heart
For I'll always love you
No matter how far apart
wow, this is sweet, and kinda sad, it makes me depressed .... people all want to hear those words, i am one of them i will admit, this rhymes and is very clear, i think you did a good job writing this... can't wait to read more of your work ...
Those Three Words...I love you? Hm. How often does anyone wish to hear them from that special someone? Nice rhythm to this one, quite pleasant to read aloud thanks to the rhyme. Cheers Azuire
P.S. If you'd like a different three words do go read my Three little words.
Submission Name: Those Three Words
