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    dots Submission Name: Saturateddots

    Author: Soul-Hugger
    ASL Info:    33/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 409/222/66
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1117
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    I am like an aspen leaf,
    trembling slightly in the breeze,
    and listening to the summer rain,
    sprinkling softly through the trees.

    For a moment I feel like a sponge,
    drinking from the forest floor,
    absorbing everything I see,
    and sending out my roots for more!

    Submitted on 2006-11-19 01:07:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Just what etherealpoet said...and everyone else.


    Seriously, I couldn't have said it better.
    | Posted on 2011-09-17 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      More mission statement ... it's a charming rhyme and abab...cdcd works a lot better than aaaa etc!

    Rhyming without messing up one's true expression is a fine art, and I think you have the trick of it wired-in - which I guess only about half of people have!
    | Posted on 2010-03-02 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey i loved this, it said so much with so few words and just made me feel all fuzzy inside when reading it as if a certain youthfulness returns and captures me in the moment. I think your gift for writing is making people experience feelings they have long forgotten and it just captures you for the moment.

    My favorite line was "drinking from the forest floor" this was just such a refreshing image! I loved it. Thanks for sharing this.


    | Posted on 2009-11-17 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
      "All eight lines of this poem made sense and convinced me of several things, (1)-You have a deep seated feeling for nature and all that surrounds you (2)-You are a sensative caring person. (3)- You are a good observer and notice even the smallest details. (4)-You are not afraid to bare your soul to others, and by doing so you give us a glimpse of our own. (5)-Your writing is insightful and sublime.----I could continue but will end by saying, great job and never stop writing----Mugsy-----
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by mugsy | [ Reply to This ]
      Amazing imagery! This poem created such delicate beauty. I only wish I was reading it still.

    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by etherealpoet | [ Reply to This ]

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