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    dots Submission Name: Fallingdots
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    Author: crazy_83
    ASL Info:    28/f/mo
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 27/29/18
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
    Total Views: 885
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    Bytes: 227



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    dotsFallingdots
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    Falling into Heaven
    Away from the lies
    Telling myself its over
    Can he hear my cries


    Falling back to hell
    Back to the pain
    Crying from the hurt
    Hoping for the rain




    Submitted on 2006-11-19 02:58:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its ok I like it but then again should of wrote more nice write, ty
    | Posted on 2006-12-06 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      I am sick of telling people this is good and that is great and I like this or that and keep it up...so I am going to tell you like this. It gets to the point. I know what it feels like to want the rain when there is a lot of pain involved. I know you will write no matter what...so there ya go.
    I understand totally!
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Desolate_beauty | [ Reply to This ]
      Like this. Short sweet to the point Good
    Keep it up :)
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]


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