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Author: elseibi
ASL Info:    20/f/uk
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Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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Just wrote whatever popped into my head. Enjoy :)


A smile can light the face of millions,
or just give hope to one,
it's such a simple gesture,
yet it warms you like the sun.

A smile from a newborn,
is passed to the mother,
the joy is infectious,
and passes to another.

In this way a simple smile,
can cheer up any day,
so just smile at passers by,
as you go on your way.

You never know,
the smile you started,
could reach that one person,
who means the world to you.

isnt it worth it ?
what's there to loose ?

just a little one,
smile for hope,
smile for love,
or just smile, for the sake of smiling.

Submitted on 2006-11-19 08:41:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This was a lovely poem, Louise, very thoughtful, beautiful and it sure made me smile! Keep up the good work!!
| Posted on 2007-01-29 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
  I miss seeing happy poetry!!! I like it. You have your own style. keep writing
| Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by iKnowWhoIAmNow | [ Reply to This ]
  this a gorgeous poem. so bright and happy, we don't see enough poetry like this on here.
absolutely wonderful,
i'll be smiling all day now!
| Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]
  Absolutely wonderful! Excellent meter, and the rhyme was near letter perfect, not only a fine poem, sweet, but some first class philosophy to follow...shows a fine understanding of poetry in general...Bravo!!! Bravo!!!
| Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
  It's Great!
| Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Squall Leon Hea | [ Reply to This ]
  This is wonderful, and so refreshing and bright, Louise! By the way, I have a poem with the same title! But your's is better'n mine, Love!!
| Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  What a lovely and uplifting write this is Louise, and sound advice for everyone.

Lots of smiles for you.

| Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  good poem I like to smile to and feel the same way
| Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]

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