just the name of your poem caught me, and of course i made the right decision to read it! its short and too the point and i truly believe that your one of those people who can pull off short pieces of work and not leave them lacking. good write!
What a succinct poem. The first line is very engaging, a snippet sentence which makes you want to read on. The idea of words that have become stagnant and the same situations replaying. This line: “Realms of carbon-copy dreams prevent escape” is fantastic. I have so felt like this, like the horrible helixes of time.
So much for talking
Senseless words remain unchanged
situations are the same.
Realms of carbon-copy dreams
nights are gray as are the days
wonder fills a mind (encaged)
Just as an example, I've tweaked your work slightly to demonstrate how you could tighten the lineation without radically changing either the poem or the meaning. Short pieces such as these tend to convey a great deal in very few lines. This was a fairly mature post for someone only 17.