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Darkness


Author: SOS33
ASL Info:    20/f/usa
Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 39 /51 /41
Words: 100
Class/Type: Poetry /Happy
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I was having a good day.


Darkness



No Darkness surrounds me,
not a red tear is shed
since I have decided that
I'd rather not be dead
Although i still can't
look in the mirror and smile
I'm sure that will change,
in just a little while.
The good thing is,
that I'm not sad all the time,
and my secret plastic friend,
has been broken into nine.
The greens are greener,
the whites whiter,
even the sun is a little bit brighter.
So what can I say, to this change
in spirit & mind?
Only that I'm slowly leaving the sad darkness,
behind.




Submitted on 2006-11-19 11:03:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  what can i say about it? i guess you want to do something good but it doesnt have rhythm and thnose thing that makes a poem better. you use simple words without a meaning. i mean you dont have many symbolism and those things, i hope you getme .. so wel thanks for sharing anyway . and if you have time please take a look to my writings have a nice day and peace and love
Victor
| Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]


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