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I am tired

Author: SOS33
ASL Info:    20/f/usa
Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 39 /51 /41
Words: 76
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I am tired

I am tired...

of waiting:
for life to get better,
fort his depression to go away,
to gain self confidence and esteem.

of urges:
to hurt my self in many unimaginable ways,
to end it all,
to slice my emotions open with a knife.

of living:
when I am nothing but an empty shell,
when I hate myself,
when i want to just float away.

I am tired of my life.

Submitted on 2006-11-19 11:05:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow. good way to express your problems. it was really orginial. i like how you set it up. just dont do anything stupid. ok? talk to someone.

nice write.
| Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Qutedia7 | [ Reply to This ]

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