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    dots Submission Name: I am tireddots
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    Author: SOS33
    ASL Info:    20/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 39/51/41
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI am tireddots
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    I am tired...

    of waiting:
    for life to get better,
    fort his depression to go away,
    to gain self confidence and esteem.

    of urges:
    to hurt my self in many unimaginable ways,
    to end it all,
    to slice my emotions open with a knife.

    of living:
    when I am nothing but an empty shell,
    when I hate myself,
    when i want to just float away.

    I am tired of my life.




    Submitted on 2006-11-19 11:05:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow. good way to express your problems. it was really orginial. i like how you set it up. just dont do anything stupid. ok? talk to someone.

    nice write.
    -Diamond.
    | Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Qutedia7 | [ Reply to This ]


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