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    dots Submission Name: Darkest Before Dawndots
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    Author: Soul-Hugger
    ASL Info:    33/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 409/221/65
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 711
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 89



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    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsDarkest Before Dawndots
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    I feel pain, but shed no tears,
    for changes lie beneath the pain of broken hearts.




    Submitted on 2006-11-19 13:18:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think this is great! The size makes you ponder and ponder and ponder....
    I think i stared at these two lines for ten mins trying to figure out what and where the exact feelings were. And i still have the slightest idea.
    Great write, i will be thinking about it.

    Fana
    | Posted on 2010-06-26 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      You could "build on this", but so could the reader. Reading this couplet or epigram started me on a whole train of thought and feeling!

    I so love tiny little poems that weigh a lot, and this one delighted me.
    | Posted on 2010-03-02 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
      short but powerful. I like that its short. It makes it more meaningful. It gives off the feelings(characteristics) of giving up, and hesitation.
    | Posted on 2009-11-26 00:00:00 | by SarahE.P. | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow is this short or what?
    I think you really can build on this.
    Cheers
    Azuire
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]


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