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    dots Submission Name: Letters And Photographsdots
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    Author: BleedingTears
    ASL Info:    16/f/Neverland
    Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 418/289/62
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Lostfriend
    Total Views: 799
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsLetters And Photographsdots
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    Your photos and letters scattered across my floor.
    Retracing every one of them.
    Rereading all of yesterday and the rest.
    It's not something we can live in.
    And you can't keep your life on hold.
    Don't pretend we're not fading.

    [Chorus]
    And oh, how you had me at the edge of my seat,
    On the tip of my toes,
    Left me wondering what's in your head.
    Signing all your letters.
    "Forever, only me."
    Hiding in all your photographs.
    Kept me wondering.

    So, tell me what I've done wrong
    Tell me what it means behind all your letters
    Explain if your smiles are real in my photographs.
    Don't confess you're into it.
    Don't confess this is the end of it.

    [Chorus x2]

    This song isn't close to over
    Not even close to over. [x4]




    Submitted on 2006-11-19 13:52:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow, I really loved reading this! I'm not that big into writing lyrics, nor am I that good at it, but you're mastered it! Can't wait to read more!

    =Ayane=
    | Posted on 2006-12-17 00:00:00 | by Ayane | [ Reply to This ]
      i loved all of this. you wrote it so beautifully. i've never written a song before but it seems cool. good job.
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by DontLetGo421 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love how it ends "This song isn't close to over
    Not even close to over. "

    It leaves us wanting to know more!

    Love and Peace,
    lynn


    | Posted on 2006-12-02 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is really good. i am trying to get into song writing but im not that good yet, so i think im mainly gonna stick to poetry for now. but i cant wait to read this again once its complete.


    billy
    | Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by kession | [ Reply to This ]


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