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    dots Submission Name: Love me?dots

    Author: every48seconds
    ASL Info:    25/M/toronto
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 123/163/129
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 800
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       Random poem from my own thought #1

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    dotsLove me?dots

    Do you love me?
    That's a stupid question isn't it
    You moved on already didn't you?
    "No more crushes"
    I have to learn that
    I can't keep on loving you
    I can't keep on beating myself up over you
    Your gone,out of my life
    Can I accept that?
    Without wanting to hang myself...
    I can't say...
    Cause I don't know
    If I could
    Say how much you mean to me
    And it was finally at the right time
    I could finally
    After two painful years of my life
    Ask you the question,
    Do you love me?

    Submitted on 2006-11-19 15:36:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this actually happened to me. i was engaged to who i thought was THE guy, but he was only using me the whole time. i thought my life was over when he left, but god proved in time that it was better, because he had someone who was ten times greater than what i thought this man was.

    the longing in this poem really touches the heart, and i enjoyed it very much. keep writing and god bless!

    ~ lizzy
    | Posted on 2009-06-30 00:00:00 | by gwenn sundala | [ Reply to This ]
      i love the style of writing when the author uses questions in their work, it kills to have to stop loving, because it is human nature to love. Trust me, i have had so many falls, its difficult to get back up. Just keep expressing yourself
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by caelyn | [ Reply to This ]
      it nice and cool but it seems as if youre talking to someone
    | Posted on 2006-11-19 00:00:00 | by Squall Leon Hea | [ Reply to This ]

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