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    dots Submission Name: The Autobiography of Jane Doe.dots
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    Author: Qutedia7
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 54/70/31
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/
    Total Views: 122
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    Description:
       I had to write a poem in my Lang. Arts class about the "Journey of Life." It had to have ryhme,similes, metaphors, sound devices, rhythm, imagery, and more. I really like this poem because its different from my other work. Its kinda emo. < Like my friend Abby would say. I titled the poem, "The Autobiography of Jane Doe", because this poem has no idenitity. This poem is about anyone and everyone, and the other side of them. [ie.. What they might be going through]
    Jane Doe is a person with no idenitity. < Yeah...

    Hope you enjoy!
    -Diamond



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    dotsThe Autobiography of Jane Doe.dots
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    Life is always written for everyone.
    And my life isn’t any different, as you may know
    With its ups and downs, coming and maybe to go
    Back to its state of turmoil.

    People have acted as if life is a box waiting to be opened.
    It’s true as we see the darkness of me,
    With force to keep it low-key.
    But it slowly grabs me away.

    As I whisper my thoughts and feelings to the wise atmosphere,
    Thinking that it may not reply,
    Because the atmosphere may not abye
    With the way, I am writing my autobiography.

    As the pouring rain drips upon my face,
    I feel as if my feelings are pure and distant in the past.
    If I were a gazelle running fast,
    To forget my memories of hurt and anger.

    When a tear falls across my face, I scream and wonder why I go through this,
    My life arriving at a point of destruction, BOOM!
    With my life going through a point of doom,
    And I say to myself, “This is my written autobiography.”




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