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    dots Submission Name: 1dots

    Author: billy corgan
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    Everything is not in order I have abandoned you that is to say myself
    laying now in a lined state of exhaustion it permeates through all relief
    broke way through to a promise that might have turned me into a child again one who was lost conscience wise, in awe of the precious allure grasping my lobe

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