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Aren't You Proud?

Author: x__beenplayed
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Class/Type: Poetry /The pain inside
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Could it be love that keeps bringing me back to you...or am I just a booty call?

Aren't You Proud?

verse 1:
as i watch you pass by
i can't help but shake my head
i'm so stupid
and it's all because of you
you broke apart my heart
and stepped on
all the little pieces
that now lie on the ground

you called and i came
running right back to you
you took me in your arms
before throwing me out the door
and slamming it in my face

can't you see that i can't move on
not when my heart still lies with you
look at me, aren't you proud?
that i still cry myself to sleep
and i still don't understand how i
i ever let myself get in this deep

verse 2:
i pretend that i'm fine
though i am nowhere near it
my tears still fall
and it's all because ofyou
you broke apart my life
you broke me down
and now i'm barely breathing
as you take me in again

verse 3:
as i look at you now
i just have to turn away
i'm so ashamed
and it's all because of you
you broke apart my pride
with those sweet words
and that look in your eye
just made things so much worse

aren't you proud
that i threw it all away
to get nothing in the end
aren't you proud
aren't you proud
aren't you proud?

Submitted on 2006-11-20 01:25:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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