Description: i havent written a poem in a long time now... anway, this piece was inspired by a fellow user's work, this user gives you great critiques that either want you to try harder, or not try at all. He's the one that got me on this site in the first place anyway, so blame him. lately i heard he's in to guys. meh.
here's the link to his piece you can see the original of this piece there. http://www.eliteskills.com/z/124344
i'm glad i came upon a comment of yours so i could happen upon a poem of yours also...
i have felt this numerous times....and this reminds me so much, coincidentally, of a movie i watched last night with Jeff Bridges.."a dog year"
he was a writer in it...contracted to do a novel..and all he could do was stare at the little line on the computer screen where letters were supposed to start showing up..
i like this poem because you really create the sound of writer's block...the useless tapping of the keys...when nothing coming out is making sense or going anywhere...sometimes i just start hitting the same letter all the way across the screen...
I can venture a guess as I've read this before and that same person that drives you to literary buffness is probably the same person that I have let down time and again with my lack of forward momentum with my own writing. One day, I keep telling myself, one day I will do you guys proud. In the meantime I waft around a desolate creative landscape.... so yeah... rather than pommel myself... I better go 'meh'.
Tali, he's just saying I'm into guys because he wants me. It's ok, I can deal with that lol.
As for you Pietro... um, think nonsensical...
Doobity doo wah wah katchunk blingity poo... doowop a ding dang doo. And hyennnnnnaaaaaaa's on the savanahhhhhh make me wannna do the lambada on a Landrover as I shoot furiously scribbling Filipinos in the Congo with my rifle.