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    dots Submission Name: An Ishigaki Dreamdots
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    Author: oixi
    ASL Info:    50/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 196/243/100
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 779
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 168



    Description:
       A haiga poem - haiku with a picture.


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    dotsAn Ishigaki Dreamdots
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    graceful junipers
    play and bathe in bright sunlight
    a calm sea of green




    Submitted on 2006-11-20 13:56:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      well, the haiku is great...i just cant see the pic!! only a wee red cross...and now i'm kinda upset
    :(
    michelle

    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by whirl | [ Reply to This ]


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