[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Happy Sadnessdots

    Author: Lareth
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    5 - 103/139/48
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Friendship
    Total Views: 1010
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 784

       I write this for everyone that meant so much to me, and yet it seems like our lives were walled from each other.

    I'm not really expecting to get much feedback... I never really do... but thank you for those who will. (and not just because I said you wouldnt ...you know who you are...)

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHappy Sadnessdots

    I never truly knew you;
    But I knew enough,
    To feel,

    To care.

    I could never say
    What I felt,
    About you,

    And me.

    We are so different,
    Yet one and the same.
    In heart,

    In mind.

    Now you have your life,
    And I, my own.
    My inspiration,

    My friend.

    I'm sorry I could never meet you,
    Things may have been different.
    But now you remain,

    And I sought new life.

    I hold no regrets,
    For my life.
    I am who I choose to be.

    So I chose.

    Would you join me in my
    Happy Sadness?
    I wish to celebrate

    Our lives.

    Submitted on 2006-11-20 14:31:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      this is really good. it wasnt very discriptive or long, but as the reader i could really feel all the emotions. good write :)
    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]
      This really makes me want to smile, and though there's a bittersweet sorrow, it shows the true heart I know you have. You've always been so caring and uplifting to those around you, and this just shows more of who those that care about YOU really know.

    This is beautifully unique, and a sweet tribute to those that have come and gone from your heart...and those that chose to stick around.

    Well done, as always...

    Forever saved,

    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by SorrelsReality | [ Reply to This ]
      very beautiful luke i absolutely love this
    it is so very true that people who must live totally seperate lives can be so very similar
    | Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Giving written by jjd
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Commencement written by Ramneet
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Linger written by saartha
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    To written by SavedDragon
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Can't let my demons go written by faideddarkness
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]