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    dots Submission Name: Happy Sadnessdots
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    Author: Lareth
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    5 - 103/139/48
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Friendship
    Total Views: 924
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 784



    Description:
       I write this for everyone that meant so much to me, and yet it seems like our lives were walled from each other.

    I'm not really expecting to get much feedback... I never really do... but thank you for those who will. (and not just because I said you wouldnt ...you know who you are...)


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    dotsHappy Sadnessdots
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    I never truly knew you;
    But I knew enough,
    To feel,

    To care.

    I could never say
    What I felt,
    About you,

    And me.

    We are so different,
    Yet one and the same.
    In heart,

    In mind.

    Now you have your life,
    And I, my own.
    My inspiration,

    My friend.

    I'm sorry I could never meet you,
    Things may have been different.
    But now you remain,

    And I sought new life.

    I hold no regrets,
    For my life.
    I am who I choose to be.

    So I chose.

    Would you join me in my
    Happy Sadness?
    I wish to celebrate

    Our lives.




    Submitted on 2006-11-20 14:31:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is really good. it wasnt very discriptive or long, but as the reader i could really feel all the emotions. good write :)
    | Posted on 2008-03-09 00:00:00 | by Aangskate | [ Reply to This ]
      This really makes me want to smile, and though there's a bittersweet sorrow, it shows the true heart I know you have. You've always been so caring and uplifting to those around you, and this just shows more of who those that care about YOU really know.

    This is beautifully unique, and a sweet tribute to those that have come and gone from your heart...and those that chose to stick around.

    Well done, as always...

    Forever saved,

    Sorrel
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by SorrelsReality | [ Reply to This ]
      very beautiful luke i absolutely love this
    it is so very true that people who must live totally seperate lives can be so very similar
    rachelle
    | Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by dark lover | [ Reply to This ]


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