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    dots Submission Name: C'est la viedots
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    Author: elseibi
    ASL Info:    20/f/uk
    Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 228/180/38
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Just worte whatever popped into my head, i learnt a little french in school but probs got it abit wonky, please feel free to correct me. thanks again

    ~lou~


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    dotsC'est la viedots
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    C'est la vie,
    these words for me,
    are foreign,
    but familiar.

    This is life,
    ces mots pour moi,
    sont étranger,
    mais familier.

    Does it matter,
    the language we use,
    when the truth is,
    that actions speak louder,
    than words.

    I love you,
    Je t'adore,
    Ich lieb Di,

    It all means the same,
    are any worth less,
    than the others ?

    It matters not,
    our language,
    or country we call home.

    All that counts,
    is what's inside,
    and for me,
    c'est la vie.




    Submitted on 2006-11-20 16:25:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't speak those languages, but oddly enough I liked this poem. I've never heard of someone actually going to the trouble of pointing it out: we let the barriers of language, the so-called Mark of Society, get in our way of actually understanding one another. Great write, elseibi.

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2006-12-01 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      thanks dearest for your comment. I love your poems,especially this one.i wish u all the best and look forward to reading more from you.
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by LizzyD | [ Reply to This ]
      A fusion of the languages! What a poem.
    Language is but a creation of man and culture.
    The ending is beautiful.
    Cheers!
    Azuire
    P.S. I have a poem of the same name if you wish to check it out :)
    | Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this very much,. And no the language means nothing but where we come from,.
    This is really beautiful written,

    "Does it matter,
    the language we use,
    when the truth is,
    that actions speak louder,
    than words."

    Liked these lines alot, I feel the same way, Actions means so much more than words, the word choise is excellent.

    "All that counts,
    is what's inside,
    and for me,
    c'est la vie."

    loved the ending,, very thoughtfull and meaningful,, whats inside is what counts its great the flow was wonderfully written..

    Keep it up, great style use..


    | Posted on 2006-11-22 00:00:00 | by -=Bass=- | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, this IS really quite excellent! I loved it there is a wonderful economy of words, the different languages are an added pleasant bonus, just plain wonderful...Bravo...you certainly do understand poetry...
    | Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      how zero kool is this poem! i luv the way the langauge switches!
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]
      This lovely and articulate! The foreign language adds novelty and finesse! I like it!
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      ahh i can't stand when you write in another language!! i don't understand one bit of it!
    | Posted on 2006-11-20 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]


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