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    dots Submission Name: Are you there?dots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    dotsAre you there?dots
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    In some way,
    I fell that you're watching me,
    And in others,
    I know that you're not,
    I wish you would speak to me,
    Tell me what's wrong,
    So maybe I can understand,
    Why,
    Why you don't talk to me anymore,
    Why you avoid me,
    Avert my eyes,
    When I look at you,
    It makes me miss,
    The friend I used to have,
    The one who could tell me,
    Her heart,
    Her dreams,
    Her everyhting,
    But now all I see,
    Is my best friend is gone,
    Gone where I cannot follow,
    Gone where I cannot see.




    Submitted on 2006-11-21 15:45:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That's really good and meaningful =]
    It's really hard to loose someone you love, even more hard if you can see them everyday and know you can't just hug them.
    =[
    | Posted on 2007-01-30 00:00:00 | by Xx_bang_bang_ | [ Reply to This ]
      Its hard but let go....

    after some years it just slips...

    | Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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