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    dots Submission Name: Eternal Frienddots
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    Author: Lil gal
    ASL Info:    32/F-ya/here
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 355/216/37
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1351
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 267



    Description:
       This is for DesecratedDream. short and to the point.


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    dotsEternal Frienddots
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    Long standing friend,
    remains to the end.

    Always
    there
    for
    me.

    Our eternal relationship
    will always be.

    Never
    breaks
    or
    bends.

    My long standing friend.




    Submitted on 2006-11-21 17:23:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      p.s.
    i hope you don't mind me rewritting your poem
    ;)
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by Emurc6 | [ Reply to This ]
      i my be a pessimist about this but....
    a lot of people see "friends" like there always going to be there for you and they will always be there for you, but from the 17 years i've lived and about 8 years i remember people have there own motives and ideas on how life works....but although end i'm always left with on pperson that rarley wrong me.. myself


    ever enduring enemy,
    remains to the end.

    Always
    there
    against
    me.

    Our eternal relationship
    will never be.

    Never
    aids
    or
    loves.

    My ever enduring enemy.
    | Posted on 2007-03-04 00:00:00 | by Emurc6 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this one! Its short but sweet nice!
    | Posted on 2006-11-28 00:00:00 | by Chelsea_Is_Neat | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this one a lot!
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by Silentsea | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a nice small piece. I liked it n wish I had a friend like that still but I dont. awwwwwwwwww
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]
      Preatty cool short tho
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]
      I love you too... (tear) :) thx a lot
    | Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by DesecratedDream | [ Reply to This ]
      kewl! i wish i had such friends......tear
    | Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]


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