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Author: Kasper187
ASL Info:    24 m Texas
Elite Ratio:    2.03 - 71 /64 /43
Words: 45
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Glass made to shatter
Words written to be spoken
Eyes made to cry
Hearts made to be broken...



© ©2006 Anthony Paul Garcia/
-SorrowsNomdeplume




Submitted on 2006-11-21 18:18:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  simple, but sweet. very nice. hearts are broken all the time, but i dig the line.
| Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
  short , yet expressive it's very nice
| Posted on 2006-11-21 00:00:00 | by in shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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