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Thoughts of you run through my head Your image in my eyes The words you left me in my heart The kiss still on my lips As time goes by And the world moves round Everything seems to slip Everything in my life swirls and wirls Everything that is But one, one simple thing will never change My love for you will stay the same Thoughts of you run through my head Your image Your words The kiss still on my lips |
I really like how this flows! Its really pretty and sweet... Good Work and Keep Writing!| Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by Chelsea_Is_Neat | [ Reply to This ] | it's really great. pretty. keep writing | ~!rocker5871!~ | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by rocker5871 | [ Reply to This ] | This is really lovely. I like it very much. its so pretty. Makes me feel like the girl I am. Thanks! As far as improvement. I think you need to write more poems! this one is lovely! | | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Desolate_beauty | [ Reply to This ] | fine, fine, almost like a lyric...a love song...nicely done...a simple piece of poetry but still quite well done...Bravo!...Michael | | Posted on 2006-11-22 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ] | |