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I Am


Author: SorrelsReality
ASL Info:    25/ Female/ See Quote.
Elite Ratio:    6.52 - 175 /113 /20
Words: 369
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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This is pretty self explanatory. But let's just say that love, life and my Lord are all blended into this piece. It's not meant for everyone to love...or even like, it's an expression of my travels and my triumphs, my ups and downs, my trials and my struggles with my walk in faith. Praise Him, for He is my heavenly father.


I Am



The lump inside my throat is gone
and my nerves have calmed just fine;
The tears dried up upon my cheeks
so maybe it's a sign?
A sign of what you may as well ask
though it's simple to explain;
A sign that He is with me
Whenever I call his name.

Throughout my life I've struggled
I've faught with who I am;
And now it seems I'm back to me
ready to take a stand.
It seems so insignificant
to those who don't believe;
I only pray my brand new life
will help open thier eyes to see.

I know that some will judge me
but, I won't let that in;
For He alone protects my heart
from furthering in sin.
There are days when all seems empty
when tears continue to fall;
It's times like these I praise Him
His name alone I call.

You see, He gave His life
for myself and all of you;
He didn't do it for glory
and He had nothing left to prove.
My sins no longer hold me down
they no longer have control;
My faith and love abounds my heart
this I truly know.

One day, I'll meet a soul
searching just like mine;
For He'll place them here beside me
through good and bad times.
My friends, my family, and those I love
help me to be strong;
But my Lord and saviour, Jesus Christ
has been there all along.

I can feel Him here with me
my rock when I'm so weak;
Opening my eyes...helping me to see.
Lessons learned each and every day
each test I pass and fail;
A story, appearing stagnent
Until He blows wind upon my sails.

To new places, He sends me to
out to spread His word;
I'm thankful for these blessings
for they're more than I deserve.
He knows my heart, my deepest search
in time He'll breathe new life;
Rewarding me for all I'll do
making me a mother...and a wife.

I know these prayers seem small
but pray for them I do;
Along with things that weigh my heart
I'll pray most of all.....for you.

His word, is my truth.




Submitted on 2006-11-22 14:01:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Your poetry is like a warm summers rain. I like how you bring God into your life and poems! Your life will be great and you find a soul mate.
Good luck and I hope I will hear from you soon!!!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  Your poetry is like a warm summers rain. I like how you bring God into your life and poems! Your life will be great and you find a soul mate.
Good luck and I hope I will hear from you soon!!!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  Sorrell, this is lovely and very inspiring. You should share a copy of this with your minister! He would be enchanted by it.
| Posted on 2006-11-22 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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