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Submission Name:
buring flower
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Author:
dark figure
ASL Info:
17/m/uk
Elite Ratio:
4.19 - 66/74/29
Words:
87
Class/Type:
Poetry/Dark
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put this god dam fire out lol
buring flower
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burning petals
flames so bold and bright
for ever condemmed
as its flames bring life to this night
buring flower of of my heart
accompanied by the piano of the the deceaced
this light in the dark
being consumed by an evil beast
for ever alight
bringing warth to others
draing me of life
as this fire that could never be smothed
buring flower of my heart
finaly running short
burning flower of this fading life
that aquired every thing that it saught...
Submitted on 2006-11-22 16:03:18
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why would one burn such flowers?
just kidding.
try and deal with this evil by talking to that guy in the holy bible...
| Posted on 2006-11-22 00:00:00 | by
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