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Submission Name: buring flower dots

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Author:	dark figure
ASL Info:	17/m/uk
Elite Ratio:	4.19 - 66/74/29
Words:	87

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	996
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Description:
put this god dam fire out lol

buring flower dots

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burning petals
flames so bold and bright
for ever condemmed
as its flames bring life to this night

buring flower of of my heart
accompanied by the piano of the the deceaced
this light in the dark
being consumed by an evil beast

for ever alight
bringing warth to others
draing me of life
as this fire that could never be smothed

buring flower of my heart
finaly running short
burning flower of this fading life
that aquired every thing that it saught...

Submitted on 2006-11-22 16:03:18 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
why would one burn such flowers?
just kidding.
try and deal with this evil by talking to that guy in the holy bible...
| Posted on 2006-11-22 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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