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    dots Submission Name: What Really Mattersdots

    Author: Toxic_Rayne
    ASL Info:    18/f/a happier place
    Elite Ratio:    4.7 - 1314/1095/162
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 1253
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsWhat Really Mattersdots

    I know what lies beneath,
    I've seen the flash of teeth
    Gash out memories of old,
    heeding the lies you've been told
    Lies of beauty and lies of fame,
    lies photoshopped in a picture frame

    So rip off this face, this mask of glass...
    It's not who I am anyway

    Submitted on 2006-11-22 16:55:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this...its deep....
    | Posted on 2007-12-01 00:00:00 | by iaida | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice stuff! A superbly written poem, with voice and cadence. We wear the mask to perform on the stage of life. However, we need to be for real and shed thy skin.
    Keep sharing.

    | Posted on 2007-11-21 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem alot... I like some of your other work alot better but this poem really gets the meaning across and I understood fully what you were trying to say...

    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by CaughtRedhanded | [ Reply to This ]
      I get it!!! People can be so fake and post things that they are really not right? A lot of dating sites are this way all dressed up and not what they really look like. Great peace!!!
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2006-12-10 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      I've always loved the way a couple of lines can say so much. Simple words when put together can have the strongest meaning sometimes. And to me that is genius. The mask of glass line is creative of you.
    | Posted on 2006-12-05 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the "Mask of Glass" idea. That's cool. You spelled Photoshopped wrong, though. I've been using that program too much lately not to notice.

    Darn you, sisters mine! Darn you and your impossible number of Christmas photos!!!

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2006-12-04 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      It feels a littel common, or at least the end. but the first part is as allways beautiful and mind wandering. I don't really get a picture from it though.
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Wolfie | [ Reply to This ]

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