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    dots Submission Name: One Last Timedots
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    Author: eowyn
    ASL Info:    18/f/australia
    Elite Ratio:    5.47 - 227/153/76
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 240
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1096



    Description:
       just pouring out some thoughts. i like the beach and i fel so lost.


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    dotsOne Last Timedots
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    Wind in my hair
    and sand at my feet
    there was never a better time
    to think my life through and through.

    The Beach was always the place
    that would let me think about my past
    so judgmentally
    so provocatively.

    I see it all clearly now,
    the years I wasted
    and the love I swindled.
    The times I stood still when I should
    have ploughed head on, strong.

    The water has reached my bare feet
    and I stand tall for once
    refusing to move an inch
    and ignoring the cramps in my muscles.

    It took too long for me to stop and do this
    and it may be too late to turn back
    and save my life
    for the very last time.

    The water is so cold now
    with summer’s heat long gone.
    I spent too many Christmases alone
    and forgot how to smile.

    So now I m writing to you
    one last time
    as I save this life
    one last time
    so I can see you again
    Just One Last Time




    Submitted on 2006-11-22 23:14:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really like this becuase it defies the oh-so-overindulged usage of cheesy metaphors to love and longing. i feel like this is real and genuine, an honest peice of thought extracted at a moment of true realization in your life. its beautifully written, and well composed.
    | Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by ryeker03 | [ Reply to This ]
      You have touched me deeply, i can't help reading it again and again. I am totally unknown why iam so attracted to it, maybe because i am waiting for my phone to ring one last time.
    Don't ignore it if i say i can feel your could feet, over my feet now.
    The taste of your tears feel same to me.

    Sometimes its so hard to turn your back to the years passed-by. They say there is no use of looking in past but if there was no past would you or me had been here.
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by imagination | [ Reply to This ]



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