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    dots Submission Name: Islanddots
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    Author: MyHeart2Yours
    ASL Info:    18.female.Pennsylavnia
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 96/112/42
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 69
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1085



    Description:
       I wrote this for a friend in answer to his poem.


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    dotsIslanddots
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    Time trapped in a bottle,
    oceans lapping at the ores.
    A single boat of loneliness,
    has wrecked upon the shores.
    A searching soul,
    Among the rubble of the old,
    a young man has soon been found.

    Life has blown you once off course,
    to an island far away,
    match your cards,
    and suit your deck,
    shuffle once or twice.
    Pick a card,
    perhaps the top, middle, or below?

    A young man of simple taste,
    warrior soon undone.
    A mask, a fear, a sword struck deep.
    But is it he who not be drawn to thee?

    Rebuild, rebuild,
    gather up your cards,
    draw thy sword,
    and cut thy way,
    to wide and open shores.

    It takes a humble man,
    to stand upon unsteady feet,
    it takes a strong man,
    to know that he’s been beat.
    But strip the clothes of those around you,
    and you are no less.
    You’ve seen the world for what has been given,
    and soon you curse the rest.




    Submitted on 2006-11-23 02:47:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The first stanza is a beauty. The third and the fourth are also exceptional. This is very imaginative, I find the rhymes to be a welcoming sooth to the sore eyes. Great write.
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]



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