Are you afraid of breaking me?
Can you hear my heart crying?
Can you see what I see?
A hole inside of you afraid of dying
Feel the silence of the end
The dark sounds of a cracking heart
Can you see where the pain begins
And where the dark fears come apart?
Lose myself in loving you
Feel so much rain wash over me
Watch it slip away now we are through
Lost in fear I thought you would see
Haunting dreams of a breaking me
Letting go of the chains that make me bleed
Holding inside what I have come to be
Letting go of the fears I no longer need...
© ©2006 Anthony Paul Garcia/
| another brooding, poignant piece nicely done...(suggestion: in my very humble opinion if the this poem were to have the same number of syllables in each line--say 7 or 8--it would give the poem an added thrust and "readibility") but still overall quite fine, indeed....bravo...||| Posted on 2006-11-30 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ] || This is a deep poem. I couldn't have done it better. |
Keep it up hun,
|| Posted on 2006-11-27 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ] || wow...deep. I can't really say much more||| Posted on 2006-11-25 00:00:00 | by Desolate_beauty | [ Reply to This ] |