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I Dream a Dream

Author: Caotic_Disaster
ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
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Words: 199
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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This is like two poems. I was told be someone that my first dream was to 'good girl' image, which they thought I was trying to convey, when really, it wasn't, for that is actually one of my dreams. Your probably all rolling your eyes, but it is. Othr one I just wrote because it is a smaller goal of mine, and less imprtant. Thanks.

I Dream a Dream

I dream a dream
Of a thousand worlds
Clashing into one
Within one place
Within one time
Before my own two eyes
The people talk
Unafraid of any
Judgemental thoughts
Not entering the minds
For peace and calm
Surround us
This is my dream
And to it I seek
An answer for
All problems
Which take up the time
Of life itself
Which should only be enjoyed.

I dream a dream
Of a thousand lights
Flashing at once
Within one moment
To be gone in the next
Before my own eyes
The people talk
Unafraid of any
Harsh comments about me
Not entering the minds
That tabloids lies
Surrounding me
With endless questions
That I answer truthfully
Only to be shot down
Because my answers aren't
This is my dream
And to it I seek
Endless fame
And appraisal to fans
Who take the time
To see my next movie
And loyally follow my progress.

Submitted on 2006-11-23 19:11:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like this a lot,I thought that the way in which certain lines were repeated was lovely. Well done.x
| Posted on 2007-02-22 00:00:00 | by wilted_flower | [ Reply to This ]
  nice poem
| Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by ty | [ Reply to This ]

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