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    dots Submission Name: The Gravedots
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    Author: sageeriol
    ASL Info:    23/male/GA.
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 314/322/106
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Gravedots
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    Six feet from the top I rest
    Six feet from the answer.




    Submitted on 2006-11-23 20:10:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Okay this is cool. I like guessing. So this is my take. Seeen it is called 'the Grave'-- The first line refers to that you're 6 feet under the ground, in a grave, and the second line.. the answer.. is Life the answer?
    But then again? Isn't that really the Question? Or is the Question of Life also to be found in Life itself?
    I would like to hear your intention with this one.
    Thanks for making me think about this, I liked that.

    - Janneke
    | Posted on 2007-02-24 00:00:00 | by Darth Zeus | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting, and took me by suprise a little! Quite a jolt to see such a short poem. I'm not quite sure what to make of it if I'm honest. The first line seems to beg to be taken literally as in 6 feet under...but the second line is more complicated - and I may be trying to overanalyse this - 'the answer', well you can't be a distance away from an answer if literally 6 feet under. So it seems more metaphorical...although what answer is being searched for is another thing...I suppose a link with the grave is that you have as much chance of finding the answer as if you were under a grave...well it's definitely succeeded in one thing and thats to have me wrack my brains trying to solve it!
    | Posted on 2007-01-26 00:00:00 | by selfbetrayal | [ Reply to This ]
      And was the question, Why?
    Carol
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by wannabe1 | [ Reply to This ]
      whoa. not much to say. the answer to what, exactly?

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]


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