Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: The Gravedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: sageeriol
    ASL Info:    23/male/GA.
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 314/322/106
    Words: 12
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 829
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 61



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThe Gravedots
    -------------------------------------------


    Six feet from the top I rest
    Six feet from the answer.




    Submitted on 2006-11-23 20:10:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Okay this is cool. I like guessing. So this is my take. Seeen it is called 'the Grave'-- The first line refers to that you're 6 feet under the ground, in a grave, and the second line.. the answer.. is Life the answer?
    But then again? Isn't that really the Question? Or is the Question of Life also to be found in Life itself?
    I would like to hear your intention with this one.
    Thanks for making me think about this, I liked that.

    - Janneke
    | Posted on 2007-02-24 00:00:00 | by Darth Zeus | [ Reply to This ]
      Interesting, and took me by suprise a little! Quite a jolt to see such a short poem. I'm not quite sure what to make of it if I'm honest. The first line seems to beg to be taken literally as in 6 feet under...but the second line is more complicated - and I may be trying to overanalyse this - 'the answer', well you can't be a distance away from an answer if literally 6 feet under. So it seems more metaphorical...although what answer is being searched for is another thing...I suppose a link with the grave is that you have as much chance of finding the answer as if you were under a grave...well it's definitely succeeded in one thing and thats to have me wrack my brains trying to solve it!
    | Posted on 2007-01-26 00:00:00 | by selfbetrayal | [ Reply to This ]
      And was the question, Why?
    Carol
    | Posted on 2006-12-11 00:00:00 | by wannabe1 | [ Reply to This ]
      whoa. not much to say. the answer to what, exactly?

    i tip my hat and bid thee farewell.
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by PoeticNonsense | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    126298

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Wavelength written by saartha
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Incubus written by monad
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Munyonyo written by expiring_touch
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry