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    dots Submission Name: If You Had A Momentdots
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    Author: rocker5871
    Elite Ratio:    1.37 - 191/147/90
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 125
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 549



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    dotsIf You Had A Momentdots
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    If you had a moment to give away,
    What would you do?
    Would you stop to brighten a stranger’s day?
    What would you do?

    If you had a moment to give away,
    What would you do?
    Would you stop to help a lost soul gone astray?
    What would you do?

    Would it matter what color their skin?
    Would it matter what state their in?

    If you had a moment to give away?
    What would you do?
    Would you give it your all without delay?
    What would you do?




    Submitted on 2006-11-23 20:23:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Great piece, I'm more of a short-story type person, but I enjoyed this. To me it's sort of questioning the selflessness of everyday people; your readers. I liked that.

    Keep Writing,
    Elle
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by GetFighted | [ Reply to This ]



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