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    dots Submission Name: One Last Conversationdots
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    Author: rocker5871
    Elite Ratio:    1.37 - 191/147/90
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 168
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 549



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    If I only had one last conversation with you,
    I’d tell you all the things you never knew.

    I’d tell you I love you with all my heart.
    I’d tell you without you I’ll fall apart.

    I’d tell you to remember me with a gentle smile
    And to think of me every once in a while.

    I’d tell you I love you a million times.
    I’d say you’d always be on my mind.

    If I only had one last conversation with you,
    I’d tell you to remember we both see the same sky of blue.




    Submitted on 2006-11-23 20:36:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. This is great.

    Few months ago, I lost someone who was very close to me. And I wanted to tell him how much I loved him, and how much I'm going to miss him.

    This poem portrays what I felt then very well, and I can relate to it. Definitely going on my fav list.

    Great work.
    Keep on writing! :)
    | Posted on 2006-11-24 00:00:00 | by Piper | [ Reply to This ]
      actually this would be alot of conversations with that one person. witch one would it be
    | Posted on 2006-11-23 00:00:00 | by gloomyanddoomy | [ Reply to This ]



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